Going Home Book 4

[W.Lynn]

reddawn, it's entirely normal and appropriate for each character's lines to be written as that character would speak 'em. But all the stuff in between bits of character speech should not be excused.

As one fine grade school teacher once said to a classmate, "Stop asking, because spelling always counts. If the answer to a question is one word, and you write something else, I have to grade it by what's on the paper."

We want our guy to be a better writer than those other guys out there, so picky people have fewer excuses. We don't want them to take a look in these books, and then leave it on a shelf because they don't want to decipher it.

[reddawnspokane]

No disagreement there Lynn. I am with you 100%. I definitely want to see A.A. grow as a writer so that his works reach great heights. Just having a little fun.

[W.Lynn]

Yeah, same time, I love the way Thad and Sarge "talk." Pretty sure I've met them.

[reddawnspokane]

I had to laugh at that one. Living in Central Florida and being prior service military I've seen my share of both. It's always fun to be around.

[kickstand]

I agree, post it here on the DS...that way membership is required. If we start seeing anything funky, you can pull it.
And just so we're all on the same page, I'll tell you now...if you post 90% and then pull it or say "wait till it comes out", we WILL hunt you down and do unspeakable things to you. No excuses.

[reddawnspokane]

Dark Side sounds like a good idea.

[kickstand]

Creating Home
A New Home
Home Made
Making Home
Flaming Homo (that's Spanish, right?)
Taking Home
Casa Chaos (the nickname of my childhood home)
Home Again

[Tex]

Keep 'em coming. Here is a little something to keep you guys entertained, so bring on the peanut gallery, I'm sure you will have plenty of comments.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQKRT...ature=youtu.be

Hey AA, quick question for you. Is Kessler's child bride as hot in person as she looked in the video?


Tex

[Patriotmuso]

DO it... I would think just about everyone could agree on it... I need to get 3 still.....

[AD]

........., I'll tell you now...if you post 90% and then pull it or say "wait till it comes out", we WILL hunt you down and do unspeakable things to you. No excuses.

I am one of the few that has seen this fat ass in person and I will NOT be in on the "doing unspeakable things to him" you could not recover psychologically for that in your life time.

[Gena.KY]

AA, you silly man, of course we want sneek peeks of #4. We may get mad at you but we will still like you, right guys???

Thinking About Home
Remembering Home
This isn't Home
Desperate for Home

[angeryamerican]

Hey AA, quick question for you. Is Kessler's child bride as hot in person as she looked in the video?


Tex

Yes she is!

[VINCENT]

Hey AA, quick question for you. Is Kessler's child bride as hot in person as she looked in the video?


Tex

yes, and she can cook too

[VINCENT]

reddawn, it's entirely normal and appropriate for each character's lines to be written as that character would speak 'em. But all the stuff in between bits of character speech should not be excused.

As one fine grade school teacher once said to a classmate, "Stop asking, because spelling always counts. If the answer to a question is one word, and you write something else, I have to grade it by what's on the paper."

We want our guy to be a better writer than those other guys out there, so picky people have fewer excuses. We don't want them to take a look in these books, and then leave it on a shelf because they don't want to decipher it.

blah blah blah. so picky

[VINCENT]

home morgange

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