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    Quote Originally Posted by chris0013 View Post
    Have read all the books and enjoy them....can't wait for #5.

    However 3 and 4 looked to have several gramatical errors not caught during editing and some people names changed during the story.
    1. Rene's (Taylor's friend) father....went from Tom when first mentioned to John when they had the cookout when Reggie and LeAnn got shot
    2. When Sarge, Danny and Jeff meet up with the guard at the swimming hole....the National Guard LT seems to get his name changed back and forth a couple times in a few pages....from Don (IIRC) to Shane.
    1. There's another book put out by the other side called "Rene has two daddies"
    2. Shane is Don's middle name. Lt. Donald Shane (lastnameescapesme)

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    Thanks Chris, I'll have to go back over it. You wouldn't believe what goes into the editing process but they can still make mistakes.


    Quote Originally Posted by chris0013 View Post
    Have read all the books and enjoy them....can't wait for #5.

    However 3 and 4 looked to have several gramatical errors not caught during editing and some people names changed during the story.
    1. Rene's (Taylor's friend) father....went from Tom when first mentioned to John when they had the cookout when Reggie and LeAnn got shot
    2. When Sarge, Danny and Jeff meet up with the guard at the swimming hole....the National Guard LT seems to get his name changed back and forth a couple times in a few pages....from Don (IIRC) to Shane.
    I'm drunk tonith.

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    Update FED EX seen the error of their ways and delivered book 4 yesterday . Hope to get some reading time in this weekend .

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    Hmmm... Two one-star reviews from Gaymer7 and JeffLoudermouth.

    And with their extensive body of work, they have much room to yap...
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    Just learned about this series last month. I've consumed 3 books in a month (more than i've read in 10 years).. starting book 4 today.

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    Kyle, go to the Welcome Mat and introduce yourself. Several of us on here are addicted to AA's books. Stick around & don't be shy.
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    Way to go AA! Look what I found on Facebook!

    http://thesurvivalmom.com/review-giv...home-american/

    She loved it! She has 93,338 Likes. Awesome!

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    Just finished Book 4 last night ( I know BEEN BUSY). AA great job left me wanting more only one complaint. To short. TFK

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